Today, the Violet Femmes are thrilled to host romance author, Nancy Herkness, a truly inspiring, supportive and lovely woman who showers all of us with positive energy and miles of smiles. We asked her loads of questions about her experiences as a published romance author.
Nancy Herkness’ two contemporary romances, A Bridge to Love and Shower of Stars, were published by Berkley Sensation. Music of the Night was her first romantic suspense novel. Her upcoming release Take Me Home will be available in November 2012.
She’s a member of Romance Writers of America, New Jersey Romance Writers and Novelists, Inc., and has won numerous awards for her work, including the Golden Leaf, the Write Touch Readers’ Award and the Aspen Gold. Nancy graduated from Princeton University with a degree in English literature and creative writing.
A native of West Virginia, she now lives in New Jersey with her husband and two mismatched dogs.
For more information about Nancy and her books, visit www.NancyHerkness.com.
In her usual generous style, Nancy has offered to send an autographed copy of any one of her backlist books to one commenter on this week’s blog. You will also be entered into our drawing for the month of April, where you just might win a $20 Barnes & Noble gift certificate. So be sure to leave a comment on the Violet Femmes board this week!
1. You were such a great cheerleader during our February writing challenge. Are you part of a critique group? How many of you are in it? What is your process?
Thanks for the compliment about my cheerleading for Jersey Romance Writing Month, but all I did was channel all the positive energy flowing from all the participants, including you wonderful Violet Femmes!
Yes, I am now part of a fantastic critique group, although it took me years to decide to join one. For a long time, I was reluctant to expose my fragile first draft to criticism. Then my Evil Inner Editor got too powerful, and I needed a counterbalance, so I found the Sunday Night Ladies through New Jersey Romance Writers.

My critique group celebrating the release of PROPER CARE AND MAINTENANCE OF FRIENDSHIP by group member Lisa Verge Higgins wearing hats made to match the cover of the book.
There are four of us in the group, which seems to be just the right number. That gives us a tie-breaking vote when people disagree about a critique point. We meet in person as close to monthly as possible, sending up to 20 pages of our works-in-progress to each other a week before the meeting. We print the chapters, critique them in writing, and then discuss them when we meet.
We find the face-to-face meeting helps clarify any confusion about comments, allows us to brainstorm solutions, and gives us the chance to exchange useful business information while we chat over dinner.
2. Are there any places you’ve visited that have influenced your writing?
My books tend to be set in places I know really well, so the New York metro area (where I live now) and West Virginia (where I grew up) are my favorite settings. My first book’s heroine was an engineer so I researched bridge building, focusing on the George Washington Bridge. The climactic scene of A BRIDGE TO LOVE takes place on the bridge itself, so I spent a lot of time walking across it while snapping photographs, and having my husband drive me across it so I could take copious notes.
SHOWER OF STARS featured meteorites (I’m fascinated by outer space) which gave me a great excuse to visit the meteorite exhibit at the Museum of Natural History in New York City. I ended up setting one very hot scene in the Museum.
My upcoming release TAKE ME HOME (November 2012) goes back to my roots in a small town in the mountains of West Virginia. I found it very powerful to return to my memories of my years there.
3. What authors have inspired you?
Oh my goodness, so many it’s hard to name them all! I credit Georgette Heyer with developing my addiction to romance novels. She is a goddess of a writer; I reread her books regularly. Mary Jo Putney’s books are also marvelous, and she is an incredibly nice human being. Eloisa James is one of the most elegant writers and smartest businesswomen I know; talking with her is like taking a course in Publishing 101. Ian McEwan crafts sentences that make me weep with joy and envy because I wish I could write like that.
Robyn Carr’s fantastic Virgin River series inspired my upcoming release TAKE ME HOME, which is the first book in a planned trilogy set in a fictional small town. Robyn even shared her original proposal for the series with me. How nice is that! As you know, romance writers are the most generous of people, always willing to share their experience and expertise with their colleagues in the field.
4. You’ve been writing for a number of years and have seen many changes in our industry. What do you think has changed in the way romances are viewed now as compared to when you started?
Honestly, I’m not sure the way romances are viewed has changed much at all. I always joke that romance writers are the Rodney Dangerfields of the publishing world: we get no respect. What many people don’t realize is that the sales of our popular novels support many more “literary” books which often aren’t profitable for publishers. Since I read all sorts of books, I’m happy to contribute to their publication.
5. How have you adapted in your career from the time your first book was published, until now? Did you do anything differently to re-invent yourself in phase two?
I think I have simply become more market-savvy. I still write books I am passionate about, but I have learned how to present them to an agent/editor in a way that helps them understand how to position my work in the market.
Sometimes I deliberately add an element to the stories that I know will provide a “hook” for marketing. That’s an easy thing to do without changing the central themes of my work, and it always enriches the book. For instance, in TAKE ME HOME, I wanted to bring horses into the story since I was an avid horsewoman in my youth, and horses are popular in the romance world. While I was playing with ideas, I was struck by the concept of the “whisper horse”, the special creature you can tell all your troubles to. My editor loves that aspect of the book, both for artistic and marketing reasons.
6. You recently signed a deal with Montlake Publishing. How important is an agent in negotiating an e-book deal?
My agent did an amazing job for me with Montlake. In fact, I couldn’t have done it without her. Although most of Montlake’s sales are digital right now, it also offers audio and print books, and handles foreign rights, so it’s a complex contract. Montlake is a division of Amazon, a sophisticated and powerful corporate entity, so when dealing with them, it’s great to have another professional on your side.
7. What was the attraction with Montlake? Why did you pursue e-publishing? Is pitching to an e-publisher different than traditional publishing? How does an agent help you negotiate that?
I didn’t actually pursue e-publishing per se. My agent submitted to Montlake as well as traditional publishers, and as far as I know, the pitch was identical for all of them. One unusual aspect of the pitch (for me) was that my agent did not pigeonhole my book as “contemporary romance”. She presented the plot summary and let the publishers decide how they wanted to market it. As a result, Montlake sees real crossover potential for TAKE ME HOME in the general women’s fiction market.
Montlake is attractive to me as an author for a variety of reasons. First, they publish very fast. TAKE ME HOME will be released November 6th, 2012. That’s moving at light-speed for the publishing industry. Second, they are author-friendly in many ways: cover consultation, monthly sales figures, quarterly royalty payments, etc. Third, they have the entire marketing resources of Amazon at their disposal. That’s HUGE.
The drawback is, of course, that Barnes and Noble and Books-A-Million will not stock any of the Amazon Publishing Group’s print books in their stores (although you can order them through those bookstores and their online entities) since they view that as contributing to their competition’s profits, a position which is understandable but which I hope they will reverse in the future.
8. Another NJRW member, Kathleen Long, has had great success recently with self-publishing. Did you ever consider going that route?
Absolutely! All three of my backlist books are now self-published because I made a point to get my rights back from the original publishers before digital books got hot.
It’s also a wonderful option to have for a book that might not fit into a publisher’s marketing plan, and I may yet self-publish books that have never been published before. It does require some upfront investment though. I had my backlist covers professionally designed, and if I were offering a never-before-published book, I would have a professional editor review it before I self-pubbed it. I want my readers to be assured of a quality read.
9. Have you set yourself any new goals?
After my amazing experience with Jersey Romance Writing Month, I have learned that I can set much higher productivity goals for myself. Not 30,000 words in a month (as we did in February) because while that was exhilarating, it was also exhausting! However, I think 20,000 is doable without burning out my Muse. So one new goal is to write my books faster. That makes romance readers happy because once they find an author they like, they gobble up her books.
Of course, my on-going goal is to write a better book every time. Which is challenging but necessary to me as a writer.
10. So much of marketing now falls in the author’s lap. Can you share some of your successes in self-marketing? Do you have a marketing plan?
Oh gosh, marketing! The ever-present concern in every author’s mind. I wish I could offer some brilliant insight into how best to reach our readers, but the truth is that no one really knows what creates the much-desired “buzz” about a book.
My own efforts are multi-pronged. I have a website (with a monthly contest), a blog, two Facebook pages, a Twitter account, and an email list of readers. I always carry bookmarks with me and hand them out to anyone who expresses even the smallest interest in my work.
I’ve done book-signings in bookstores and libraries, made presentations to groups ranging from library science students to local book clubs, signed stock, done television, radio and print interviews, advertised in print publications, and attended conferences. The truth is I enjoy meeting and talking to readers so this is all fun for me.
However, I think my publisher’s efforts have more effect on my sales. The covers they design and the placement in bookstores they negotiate for my books probably have the most impact. The simple fact is that they have vastly more resources at their disposal than I do. As you can imagine, I am fascinated by what Montlake can do for my book because of their affiliation with Amazon’s immense array of customers.
I would just like to thank the Violet Femmes for inviting me to join such a dynamic, talented group of writers, even for just a week. You guys rock!
Thank you, Nancy! It was, as always, a pleasure talking with you!
Joanna Shupe
/ April 16, 2012Thanks, Nancy! Very insightful, as always. Best of luck with your upcoming release. I can’t wait to read it!
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Thanks so much, Joanna! I’m excited about having TAKE ME HOME in readers’ hands. I want to see what they think about my setting in West Virginia, and all the horses. It’s kind of tough when you put so much of what you love into a book because you want it to succeed so badly. On the other hand, it makes it wonderful to write.
Lisa Verge Higgins
/ April 16, 2012The upcoming release, TAKE ME HOME is FABULOUS! I read about half of it by the time Nancy sold it. I absolutely cannot wait to get my hands on it.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Lisa, you are so kind! Lisa is one of my invaluable critique partners (see the photo above where we’re all wearing her book’s hats). She writes amazing women’s fiction which I also get to read ahead of time in critique group. We critiqued her upcoming release ONE GOOD FRIEND DESERVES ANOTHER, and it’s dynamite.
jennablueblogs
/ April 16, 2012Hi Nancy,
All the questions I’ve been wanting to ask you are right here–thanks for blogging with the femmes and for your thorough answers! I love your backlist covers (just gorgeous!) and am looking forward to TAKE ME HOME. I’ll also be avidly following your progress with writing endeavors–I can see that I can learn a lot just by watching! ; )
Best,
Jenna Blue
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Thanks very much, Jenna! I am especially delighted that you love my covers since your design background makes you a discriminating critic. Any time you have any questions about the publishing biz, feel free to email me. I’ll do my best to share my (somewhat limited) experience.
Roni Denholtz
/ April 16, 2012Very interesting interview! I am looking forward to Nancy’s new book. I have a question for you. Was it hard to get started on the second book in the series when you didn’t yet know that the first book had sold?
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Hi, Roni! That’s a terrific question. It was a decision I debated about at some length. I decided to go for the second book in the series for two reasons: 1) I had just signed with my amazing agent Jane Dystel and I had a lot of confidence in her ability to sell the first book in the series, and 2) I knew in a worst-case scenario, I could self-publish both books, so they wouldn’t be shoved in a drawer and left unread. But it was definitely a gamble. I suppose the third reason I went ahead with the third book was that I had already thought about it so much I couldn’t get my head into a different story at the time, so it was a creative decision as well.
Irene
/ April 16, 2012I never knew you were from West Virginia! Was New Jersey and Princeton in particular, a shock to you? (I was born in NJ and it still comes as a shock to me.)
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012LOL, Irene, about New Jersey being a shock! I am still kind of amazed that my children are, in fact, native New Jerseyans. I kind of eased into the whole New Jersey scene, starting by going to boarding school outside of Philadelphia, then moving gradually north to Princeton and finally to my current home 12 miles west of the Lincoln Tunnel.
The small town I live in now isn’t all that different from the town I grew up in, if you ignore the fact that New York City is just over the river. 😉 Everyone here knows each other and each other’s children; there’s lots of volunteerism; it’s pretty and green, etc. The houses are a lot closer together, and I miss having the mountains on the skyline, but I’ve adjusted. I think I’m a suburbanite at heart because it makes me happy to live here.
Susan Camp Tryforos
/ April 16, 2012And don’t forget your beloved NJ Devils! They don’t have them back in West Virginia 🙂 Nice interview, Nancy. I can’t imagine being able to write 20,000 words a month and have it come out intelligible.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Susie, how could I forget the Devils!?!?! You know, you can take credit for getting me hooked on professional hockey. Your beloved Flyers won the Stanley Cup when we were in high school together, and your enthusiasm got me interested, so I started watching the games. So you could say that I started out as a Flyers fan. BTW, the Flyers-Pens series is fascinating! Good luck!
Keziah Fenton (@KeziahFenton)
/ April 16, 2012Nancy – I never considered bridges sexy until I read Bridge to Love. I’m so thrilled to see Take Me Home will be out this year. Given your passion for the Devils, have you considered writing a hockey book?
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Funny you should ask about the hockey book! I have half a hockey romance written, but could never get a publisher interested in it. I even entered it in a contest (called Book of Your Heart for unpublished manuscripts by published authors) and won first prize and still no publisher would buy it. It’s one of my favorite works-in-progress, and one of these days I’m going to finish it and, if worse comes to worst, self-publish it. Deirdre Martin does great with her hockey heroes, so I’m hoping some editor will realize goalies can be sexy. LOL!
litaharris
/ April 16, 2012Nancy, this was a wonderful interview and gives an unpubbed author hope. You are always full of life and I will say it again, the best cheerleader ever.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Lita, you are so sweet! There is always hope! A lot of success in the publishing world is about persistence. And I find the possibilities of self-publishing hugely exciting too. I feel as though none of my work will be wasted because I can always self-publish and find my books an audience that way.
Michele Mannon
/ April 16, 2012Hi Nancy, thank you for stopping by. You’re such an inspiration as a writer and a great person to share with us ‘pubs-in-the-making’. Also, I’m excited to read TAKE ME HOME! Best wishes with it.
Your savvy insights on the flip side of writing — the business side– are incredibly valuable too. You can write your heart out, but it’s a difficult transition to thinking of writing as a business (if you want to be published). An interesting world I’m trying to wrap my head around. Finally, there is something to be said in writing faster and working within a deadline. It was exciting to discover the 30,000 words written during JeRoWriMo weren’t half bad, and it is kind of . . . fun . . . revising. So THANK YOU again for organizing it and cheering us on.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 16, 2012Thanks for the good wishes, Michele! I’m very glad to hear you found the work you produced during JeRoWriMo was usable, and that you are enjoying the revision process. I always have a hard time getting started on revisions, but once I get involved, I really love making the book stronger and tighter.
I’ve always been one of those people who writes her way into the story. I don’t outline; I just have two main characters and a conflict or two in mind when I start. Then I see what happens, and that always means fixing stuff after the first draft is done. I consider that one of the advantages of being a writer: I get second and third chances to get it right.
Good luck with your “fixing”!
Maria K. Alexander
/ April 18, 2012Hi Nancy. Glad you could join us for the week. Like you, I LOVE Robin Carr’s Virgin River series! Best of luck with you Montlake Publishing. I can’t wait to read your new book.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 18, 2012I’m delighted to be here at VF! Thanks so much for your good wishes about Montlake! I’m very excited to be working with such a dynamic new publisher.
Lori
/ April 22, 2012Nancy,
Congrats on the book release. There are so many wonderful authors from NJRW I now have a TBR pile. If your book has horses it has to be on that list for me.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 22, 2012Lori, thanks so much for your congratulations! I am very excited to be writing about horses, so I’m glad to hear you enjoy reading about them. My TBR pile is huge for the same reason as yours! So many great authors! It’s a good problem to have, IMO.
Nancy Herkness
/ April 23, 2012I want to thank the VFs so much for having me here. It’s been a great week, and I am so honored to have been an honorary member of this wonderful, talented group of writers.
Jaye Marie Rome
/ April 24, 2012It’s been wonderful having you guest with us, Nancy! (And equally great to see you in person last Saturday.)
Hugs,
Jaye